Pin Drop
Great atmosphere
Great ambiance,
In the crowded hall,
Lights flash
music blares
From speakers on the wall.
With awareness
of the task at hand
The focus is on the ball.
While the pins
in defiance,
Stand so proud and tall,
Run. Swing.
Aim.
Now drop & roll.
Unsuspecting
little guys,
How easily they fall.
Didn’t miss.
I never do.
And now I’ve got ‘em all.
Tried and true
Proven too
It’s just so easy to enthrall.
Great ambiance,
In the crowded hall,
Lights flash
music blares
From speakers on the wall.
With awareness
of the task at hand
The focus is on the ball.
While the pins
in defiance,
Stand so proud and tall,
Run. Swing.
Aim.
Now drop & roll.
Unsuspecting
little guys,
How easily they fall.
Didn’t miss.
I never do.
And now I’ve got ‘em all.
Tried and true
Proven too
It’s just so easy to enthrall.
It's about bowling. Right?
Yeah, sure. As you wish.
4 Comments:
your poems suck big time. give it up and try knitting instead
Thanks for the honest feedback.
In a world that is so full of apathy and nastiness, it so wonderfully refreshing to come across such gushing, positive, constructive criticism.
Anon,
Had you been just a little brighter you might have understood the context. Too jolly bad.
I love your rhymes. I so wish I had such talent!! Keep it up!!
This is Nancy from Israeli Uncensored News
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